BLK Homework- Continuity Sequence

The clips above show our continuity sequence first the original, then an edited version

What worked well:

• We started with a good establishing shot, so the audience would be shown the setting.
• Some of the transitions between shots were good such as from 0:09 to 0:10 (unedited version)
• We used match on action effects throughout the sequence which  look very good when edited as shown in the edited version.

What we could have done better:

• The second shot almost broke the 30 degree rule, so for reassurance we could have done the second shot for at a larger angle.
• We could have also been sharper in pausing the camera to end each shot.
• The overall concept is quite unrealistic and the last shot of the 'unreachable card' seems quite possible to reach.